Even though Isaias doesn't have all his ideas squared,He will still try to fly into the sky. He will have no string's attached when he starts to create his kite.Kite making is just something he would like to do, but He doesn't know what spectacular things he does in his "thinking-free" time. He loves to play rated m. games, even though he knows he shouldn't play them Enough about his hobbies, time for what he has been trying to reach for Isaias is a genius and he is also intelligent, he is always trying his best.
It looks like his best has paid off with most people he meets, "they're both like two dead stars colliding and fighting each other's gravitation force's, throwing off gas and matter while they collide." The young genius wants to be a scientist, so he can develop funner,more effective,yet safer ways to do thing's. His wish is to develop a reputation and an invention that will be more famous than "E=mc^2, Albert Einstien's equation of the speed of light! I know you want to learn more about this genius, but that's all for now. One more thing, unlike other youngsters, he doesn't cause cat-astrophe's.
I love the intro. Your play on words is really clever. I would go back and reread what you wrote. There are few run on sentences that could be broken up. Remember writing is just like speaking. If it's not how you would say it, then it's probably not how it should be written down. Overall, amazing work! Keep pushing yourself. Can't wait to read more!
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